In the Preface to Reflections
in a Boomer’s Eye, http://amzn.com/0996768424 ,
I explained why I started to write poetry.
“When I was thirty I became interested in writing. However,
at that time, I was focused on mysteries and thrillers (you know, Dan Fortune,
Lew Archer, and James Bond). Poetry was not something I considered writing
until I turned sixty and started to contemplate my existence. At that time my
attention span became very abbreviated due to a short circuit in my head so
poems, essays, and sundry musings were things I could finish before a squirrel
ran by or I was distracted by a bright shiny object. I also thought it was
about time that I learned to express what I was feeling, what I was seeing, or
what I was remembering in words.”
After publishing Reflections
I have continued writing but my passion has turned to writing very short,
Haiku-like, poems. A friend recently asked me if I was still writing and I said
yes but my attention span must have really shrunk because now I just write
three line poems. She laughed and said that actually it meant that I was
allowing myself to live in the moment and letting those thoughts be expressed. Since
I do believe in experiencing moments (see http://doggeddoggerel.blogspot.com/2013/03/moments.html)
I decided that she is probably right.
One of the quotes that I keep on my computer monitor is by
Robert Frost: “Poetry is when an emotion
has found its thought and the thought has found words.” So, maybe I am
actually doing that in short bursts. There are no rules on how many words it
takes to express your emotions.
Jack Kerouac said: "The
Japanese Haiku is strictly disciplined to seventeen syllables but since the
language structure is different I don't think American Haikus (short three-line
poems intended to be completely packed with Void of Whole) should worry about
syllables because American speech is something again...bursting to pop. Above
all, a Haiku must be very simple and free of all poetic trickery and make a
little picture and yet be as airy and graceful as a Vivaldi Pastorella."
His Haikus are often referred to as American Pops.
While on Jack Kerouac, I just came across a video of him
reading original Haiku to the accompaniment of a Al Cohn / Zoot Sims on jazz saxophone. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1-if3tkmZvM This is definitely worth a listen.
Here are a few of my American Pops:
Indiscretions
of youth
Create
memories
And
arthritis
It
was there
Then
it was gone
Or,
am I?
The
elevator opens
No
one is there
Good
A
hug
An
extra squeeze
A
stealthy message?
Her
eyes
Leak
a question
Silence
answers
Before I met you
I never listened to
Raindrops on the roof
Light of the gibbous moon
Through the loft’s skylight
Illuminates a spiders masterpiece
Peonies
Wind tossed and rain battered
Brighten my path
A shortcut
Across the field
Wet shoes
Rooftop TV antennas
Vestiges
Of another era
Rural blacktop
Slow tractors
A peck of apples
Searching a cemetery
For an ancestor
Seeing life
Today
The dragons won
But only round one
an enjoyable break in my day- thank you
ReplyDeleteAHA.. the comment section....Once I knew it had to be here I came back and looked again. Thanks for the smile (and for the memories of arthritis and wet shoes too). You keep writin' 'em and I'll keep readin' 'em.
ReplyDeleteI think that I might never see
ReplyDeleteA poet as lovely as art thee.
Eat more chocolate!